I am the chocolate baby
I am their 1st born
I am Trini-American
I am irresponsible
I am a 10 year old girl
I am a tomboy
I am shy
I am a coward
I am a 17 year old teen
I am a senior
I am a virgin
I am confused
I am a 22 year old adult
I am a sailor
I am a mother
I am insecure
I am a 33 year old woman
I am RESPONSIBLE
I am BRAVE
I am SURE
I am CONFIDENT
and
I AM FINALLY FREE
6 comments:
Your transition and the attributes attached to them are smooth. It goes from being a baby, to a girl, to a teen, to an adult, to finalized with an independent mature woman. Very nice
wow i love the way you had a little history timeline by your age. I like how you describe yourself at that very age. I also like how you showed how you evolved into the person you are today. I really enjoyed your poem good job.
Nice. I like how you described yourself from baby to an adult, and how you matured into a responsible adult.
I really liked your poem. I thought the style of the poem was pretty cool, but the story was even better. thanks for sharing it.
19th century Romantic-existential woman-balladeer.
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